A VISION

In keeping with the theme of CLIFFHANGERS there is one we should not forget…

Tip to the Reader…..this will give your reader a little something extra. An idea about something the character doesn’t know.

Informational

Character reveal

The blackout

The peril cut

Physical

Take this passage and see if it falls within this Cliffhanger.

Without warning, a hand covered her mouth. The smell of liquor filled her nostrils. Her feet no longer able to stand on their own, her body being drug backwards. She was loaded in to a dark vehicle. Something hard hit her in the head and silver specs began flying around her. Then there was nothing.

Where would you put this in the objective view of cliffhangers? Does it do what it needs to for the reader?

DISCUSS AND DONT FORGET TO TAKE THE TIME AND SUPPORT YOUR FELLOW BLOGGER.

Author: Pameladlockwood

I am an aspiring author. I love to work in my woodshed. I learned how to run a lathe which is my tool of choice for making lamps and bottles. I also love to dram and paint. Creating is my passion. I am a mother of 4 and a grandmother of 3. I have recently been diagnosed with a rare nerve condition called CRPS. It has been a hard road for me but through this site and creating I hope to find some solace. I am a firefight 2. I have been an applied therapy assistant for autistic children. I have a degree in two years of accounting and have received my certificate in Medical Transcription. I love to learn and grow as a person.

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