In keeping with the theme of CLIFFHANGERS there is one we should not forget…
Tip to the Reader…..this will give your reader a little something extra. An idea about something the character doesn’t know.
The peril cut
Take this passage and see if it falls within this Cliffhanger.
Without warning, a hand covered her mouth. The smell of liquor filled her nostrils. Her feet no longer able to stand on their own, her body being drug backwards. She was loaded in to a dark vehicle. Something hard hit her in the head and silver specs began flying around her. Then there was nothing.
Where would you put this in the objective view of cliffhangers? Does it do what it needs to for the reader?
DISCUSS AND DONT FORGET TO TAKE THE TIME AND SUPPORT YOUR FELLOW BLOGGER.